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    Post by Camila Valeria Sun Jun 27, 2010 10:24 pm

    These times, they're way too complicated
    It all needs to be elaborated
    You get into it for a while
    But some things never go out of style
    You still need stars when your wishing at night
    A best friend to set you right
    A good laugh
    A warm bath
    And a beautiful song you could sing along to
    Good news that will make you cry
    All the little things that money cant buy
    No war
    No more
    Just that big rainbow outside my window


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    Post by ASL Mon Jun 28, 2010 4:53 pm

    There is a mistake in the first line.

    These times there("There" should be "They're") way too complicated
    Also there needs to be a comma between 'times" and "there". You also spelled "beautiful" wrong.

    And you need to capitalize the "First, last, middle, and all important words" in the title.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:14 pm

    BLAH BLAH BLAH
    What are you, my father? Rolling Eyes
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    Post by ASL Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:43 pm

    No. But since you are a professor, your writing needs to be accomplished and well edited to show an example.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Mon Jul 05, 2010 1:42 pm

    OH WHATever!!! you can be SERIOUSLY impossible! Mad
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    Post by ASL Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:13 pm

    That's not what other people think.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 07, 2010 11:41 pm

    i dont care what other people think.this is what i think. and im not other people,im me. Razz
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    Post by ASL Thu Jul 08, 2010 1:35 pm

    Well yah of course you're you but what does that have to do with anything?
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    Post by Camila Valeria Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:35 am

    im not everyone else so please dont compare me with them. and if your trying to understand me at all u never will because i dont even understand myself... yeah i dont get that either...
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    Post by ASL Mon Jul 12, 2010 11:39 am

    Ok. Whatever.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:36 pm

    whatever Joey Rolling Eyes
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    Post by ASL Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:54 pm

    Seriously stop.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:06 pm

    fine fine fine! Rolling Eyes
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    Post by ASL Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:08 pm

    thanks
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:26 pm

    your welcome.
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    Post by ASL Thu Jul 15, 2010 9:06 pm

    Alright..........*Lock*
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    Post by The Hawk's Eye Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:04 pm

    *Unlock*

    Read this to understand why.
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    Post by ASL Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:27 pm

    Serious, why?

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