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    Let Go

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    Let Go Empty Let Go

    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:47 pm

    Let go of responsibility
    Forget about the rules
    Be freed of all your stress and grief
    stop using the wrong tools
    Let yourself fly
    Let yourself go
    run and be free
    go on and soar
    forget about your problems
    who cares about the time
    just let yourself be happy
    you know its not a crime
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    Post by ASL Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:52 pm

    So far, this is the best poem (Grammar, punctuation, and capitalization wise) that you've written.

    *Moved to Poetry forum*
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    Let Go Empty Re: Let Go

    Post by Camila Valeria Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:37 am

    thank you very much... wow for once im not mad at you. so what else do you tnk???
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    Post by ASL Mon Jul 12, 2010 11:40 am

    That you still need to capitalize more. Razz
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:34 pm

    you suck.
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    Post by ASL Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:26 pm

    No I don't.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:32 pm

    well your acting pretty sucky right now... Crying or Very sad
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    Post by ASL Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:00 pm

    I don't think so.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:11 pm

    well i do.
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    Post by ASL Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:13 pm

    *Lock*
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    Let Go Empty Re: Let Go

    Post by The Hawk's Eye Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:04 pm

    *Unlock*

    Read this to understand why.
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    Post by ASL Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:27 pm

    Again, read WHAT? Neutral
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