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sick (r.i.p M.M 3/27/09)

will_c: Normal Member; Posts : 6
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sick (r.i.p M.M 3/27/09)

by will_c Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:21 pm

good one day bad the others.
trying to fight off , we wish it was a dream
but it's life.
tears comin down , is it true please not .
not now , not ever , why us.
he can't fight longer, it's been a long time .
Don't give up please , it's to late.....

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Re: sick (r.i.p M.M 3/27/09)

by ASL Thu Jun 10, 2010 4:57 pm

That is um..... good.Try to capitalize some words.

ashleyr

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Re: sick (r.i.p M.M 3/27/09)

by ashleyr Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:26 pm

Good (:

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Re: sick (r.i.p M.M 3/27/09)

by hotpink101 Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:31 am

good job Will. Surprised

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Re: sick (r.i.p M.M 3/27/09)

by mspersin Fri Jun 11, 2010 11:36 pm

Powerful poem. I can tell this will be a theme in your future writing. Keep at it, it is an honor to your friend's memory to share his legacy with your friends!

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