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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jun 30, 2010 11:03 pm

    always watching over me
    who could it be?
    i assume it's a ghost
    that follows me from coast to coast
    it doesn't keep me safe at night
    it doesn't teach me wrong from right
    but it helps me when i need it most
    that very loving ghost
    it may not help me at the moment
    when someone teases or they torment
    but its there soon after
    to turn tears into laughter
    it helps me heal those deep set wounds
    that are more annoying than raccoons
    i'd be lost without my ghost
    the one who has helped me the most
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    Post by ASL Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:50 pm

    Umm...Improve:

    -Capitalization
    -Punctuation

    .......Again
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    Post by ASL Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:56 pm

    *Moved to Poetry forum*
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    Post by Camila Valeria Mon Jul 05, 2010 1:33 pm

    WHY do you find so much joy in telling me what to do??? Suspect
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    Post by ASL Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:10 pm

    Because I'm trying to improve your writing that's WHY.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 07, 2010 11:48 pm

    then WHY are you trying to improve my writing??? anyway mistakes and surprises are what makes life fun! come on lighten up! cheers
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    Post by ASL Thu Jul 08, 2010 1:40 pm

    So that you don't fail your tests and dare you say that mistakes are fun?
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    Post by Camila Valeria Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:11 am

    mistakes are the most enjoyable things on the planet. and why do you care if i fail a test?
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    Post by ASL Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:56 am

    Nevermind.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:40 pm

    yeah dont even try...
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:41 pm

    and you didnt answer my question...
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    Post by ASL Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:55 pm

    Because I don't need to.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:03 pm

    oh look here its the queen of england who doesnt have to do anything! oh wait its just Joey who does have to. mmmmhhhhmm queen
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    Post by ASL Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:07 pm

    Whatever
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:09 pm

    Rolling Eyes
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    Post by ASL Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:11 pm

    *Lock*
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    Post by The Hawk's Eye Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:02 pm

    *Unlock*

    No reason that this should be locked. Yes there is spam, but I shall get more strict on that if needed. That goes for you too Joey.
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    Post by ASL Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:24 pm

    But there's LOTS of spam!!
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    Post by Camila Valeria Mon Aug 02, 2010 10:37 pm

    thankyou sam!!!

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