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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jun 30, 2010 11:12 pm

    she cant stay here
    she doesnt belong
    she left the one place
    where they would join her in song
    she HAS to leave
    she HAS to go
    she cant stay HERE
    oh no oh no
    give her some credit
    she gave it a try
    we pushed her away
    now she's saying goodbye
    now she'll be joyfull
    with the people who care
    never alone
    her love she will share
    to her we've been mean
    to her we've been rude
    when she goes back to them
    they'll lighten her mood
    we never excepted her
    we made her cry
    we pushed her away
    now she's saying goodbye
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    Post by ASL Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:49 pm

    Umm...Improve:

    -Capitalization
    -Punctuation
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    Post by ASL Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:55 pm

    *Moved to Poetry forum*
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    Post by Camila Valeria Mon Jul 05, 2010 1:37 pm

    Neutral again??? really???
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    Post by ASL Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:12 pm

    Yeah. You were putting poetry in the miscellaneous forum.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 07, 2010 11:44 pm

    one question. who really cares? geez stop being so strict! loosen up a little! drunken
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    Post by ASL Thu Jul 08, 2010 1:38 pm

    No......... I'm too tired to loosen up...............wait, that made no sense. Razz
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    Post by Camila Valeria Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:13 am

    yeah it really didnt... but u should loosen up a bit.
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    Post by ASL Mon Jul 12, 2010 11:38 am

    okokok.
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:37 pm

    thankyou. and dont sass me.
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    Post by ASL Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:54 pm

    ummmmm....what?
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:05 pm

    you heard me...
    sass: to lash out at someone
    dont: to not do
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    Post by ASL Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:08 pm

    ummmm.............k'
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    Post by Camila Valeria Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:28 pm

    tnx
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    Post by ASL Thu Jul 15, 2010 9:07 pm

    *Lock*
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    Post by The Hawk's Eye Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:05 pm

    *Unlock*

    Read this to understand why.
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    Post by ASL Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:28 pm

    Oh NOW I get it. Smile
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    Post by Camila Valeria Mon Aug 02, 2010 10:22 pm

    YES! THANKYOU SOOO MUCH! I LOVE YOU SAM! (NO HOMO!)
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